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Blanche

 

Nearly bedtime in Andalucia. It was Orestes. And I think the Elektra legend is in The Oresteia, by Sophocles.

Yep, them Attic guys were really into black humor.

Hope you like the Ariadne poem. Might repost the story that came from it as well.

el Tel

 

posted by ariel70 on October 7, 2006 at 2:22 PM | link to this | reply

I love the Greek myths, Ariel, Ariadne getting dumped by her feckless,

faithless and damned ungrateful lover, after she'd saved his ass and all, that must have made her a trite bit bitter.  But the loose end of wondering whatever happened to poor old Ariadne after he dropped her off on that island, makes for good literature.

The Greeks were no shrinking violets when it came to passions, the full gamut:  Oedipus killing his Dad and marrying his Mom (yick, hardly bears thinking on), then plucking out his eyes in anguish and remorse.

The Aenead and the Iliad, Odysseus trying for ten long years to find his way home to his faithful wife, Penelope, who is being pestered day and night with suitors for her husband's lands, and she befuddles them unweaving her tapestry to buy herself time.

And I am having a memory loss..remind me which Greek killed his mother in vengeance for killing his father with her lover.  His sister was Elektra, wasn't it?  After he killed his mother, he was driven insane by the avenging Erinye, the Furies, who demand retribution for matricide, until Athena intervened and restored his sanity.

I could go on, Persephone, etc.  Love those Greeks. (and great poem).

posted by Blanche. on October 7, 2006 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

Mikea18

 

Thank you very much.

One of my greatest pleasures is inspiring another to think, and to put those thoughts in writing. I haven't read you yet, 'cos I'm not in here much lately   ( for a variety of reasons ) but I shall make a point of doing so. See what you're up to in there, see LOL

el Tel

posted by ariel70 on October 7, 2006 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

very powerful

and it made me go back to read the one before it. I liked both. The best part is it leaves stories running through my mind. I like being made to think.

Mike

posted by mikea18 on October 7, 2006 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha and tonyzonit

 

Thank you both!

 I do like a good punchline! I've written a lot of things from the very last paragraph to the beginning. I mean, I think of an ending ( or more likely it comes to me in my sleep ), and I write the story or poem on to it.

Always was a bit peculiar! LOL

el Tel

posted by ariel70 on October 6, 2006 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

Yeah, they stole my thunder!
I was gonna say the same thing. That had all the force of being hit by a double-decker bus unexpectedly. (Well, you wouldn't allow it to happen expectedly, would you?)!

posted by Antonionioni on October 6, 2006 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

The entire poem captured my attention
but, yup, that ending was a clincher!  Well done!

posted by Troosha on October 6, 2006 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala otra ves

 

Duh! " do" of course! LOL

posted by ariel70 on October 6, 2006 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala

 

Thank you very much. High praise, indeed!

I fo like a good punchline!

posted by ariel70 on October 6, 2006 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, that ending was something else...well done, Ariel

posted by Ariala on October 6, 2006 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply