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Wow...if I had received something like this I would definitely give the man a real long chance at romance!!!
posted by
Offy
on October 1, 2006 at 8:41 AM
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ariel,
if she didn't swoon into your arms after receiving this, she just doesn't know how to swoon, and good riddance, I say...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 1, 2006 at 8:26 AM
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Ariel, if it's a repost, I'm glad you reposted it...:)
I am learning, or relearning, from others on Blogit who "poet" much better than me....
posted by
Rumor
on September 30, 2006 at 10:15 AM
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Pat_B
Er ... 'lady' of course, not 'mistress'! Senior moment there!
posted by
ariel70
on September 29, 2006 at 11:37 PM
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Pat_B
Nice one!!!! Man after me own heart!
" Had we but more world and time,
this coyness, mistress, were no crime ..."
Don't you just hate it when " ... ever at your heels you hear Time's winged chariot drawing near"?
el Tel
posted by
ariel70
on September 29, 2006 at 11:02 PM
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Nice job!
Interesting slice. Reminds me of Andrew Marvel. Two days ago my son took a digital photo of my pond and emailed a picture of my 37 goldfish swimming among the lily pads.
He titled the photo file the_mistresses coy.jpg
posted by
Pat_B
on September 29, 2006 at 3:37 PM
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Well, anyway, I'm glad that you've figured it out even if I am more confused. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
on September 29, 2006 at 2:10 PM
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avant_garde
Once more, thank you!
el Tel
posted by
ariel70
on September 29, 2006 at 1:49 PM
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TAPS
OKay ... since they changed the format of Blogit, every time I've posted poetry set out in quatrains ( usually ) with single line spacing, it's ended up as a single piece of prose with double line spacing. So I've found a way of curing that ; just insert a thingy between each verse.
I'm not into all this mad, greasy HTML stuff. Leave that to boffins!
el Tel
posted by
ariel70
on September 29, 2006 at 1:48 PM
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Ariel70, Great poem. I love it. But what do the thingies in between have to do with the way it ends up? I always have to go to the HTML stuff and work with those funny codes to make mine do what I want.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 29, 2006 at 1:39 PM
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Ariel
We must mingle with tomorrow's dust. Outstanding!
posted by
avant-garde
on September 29, 2006 at 1:36 PM
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