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Ypunday, grandiflora is a lovely way of describing these beautiful blooms, and thank you for your thoughts on my poem. It came to me quite quickly, as a way of expressing the mixed feelings I always have when it's time to say goodbye. What you say is true, tears are a gift, and they sometimes result in some 'not bad' poetry.  

posted by mneme on September 23, 2006 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

More Bloggers ought to read this 'Parting w/ Daughter' poem . Touching...

I feel like shedding tears for your separation, yet know that some of these gift of tears are meant as celebration of life & its mysteries. Pictures below velebrate this poem, & Jefferson's South, respectively

         Magnolia Grandiflora ...often the second Latin name is so apt!

 

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 23, 2006 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

Taps,
I'm glad you liked it.  She still feels small and warm when I hold her, and it is hard to let go, but let her enjoy her life, she's strong and she will be fine... I think I did an ok job with her... I hope...  

posted by mneme on September 20, 2006 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

mneme, This is beautiful.  I love my sons most dearly and wouldn't trade a one of them for anything in the world, but I can't help but wonder now and then what it would have been like to have had a little daughter too.

posted by TAPS. on September 20, 2006 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply