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Ohhrreally,Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 5:57 PM
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Very Nice....
posted by
Ohhrreally
on August 24, 2006 at 4:00 PM
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LOL
Go to sleep!
I am always with you, and will be there in your dreams, to hold you close.
Get some rest, love.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 24, 2006 at 11:18 AM
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Sweetie, Come to bed with me otherwise I will not be able to sleep.
You are coming so close and kissing me so much that I am feeling like staying awake whole night . Thanks for your fearless and endless love .
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 11:14 AM
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Afzal
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 24, 2006 at 11:08 AM
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Sweetie, I am so happy to find you wishing me a colourful good night.
Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 11:02 AM
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Bhaskar.ing, Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 11:00 AM
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afzal,sometimes you are too great to be described in words !
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 24, 2006 at 10:58 AM
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~~~Good Night~~~
May your night be filled with dreams of sweetness.
I will miss you, love.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 24, 2006 at 10:56 AM
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Sweetie my dear you are so sweet . I am really very grateful
to you for appreciating my efforts in such good and inspiring words. I am here only to say good night. Thanks for returning in time .
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 10:50 AM
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And I agree with cozy....poetry doesn't have to rhyme.
I think you're very talented.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 24, 2006 at 10:41 AM
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Very beautiful
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 24, 2006 at 10:39 AM
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cosy, Thanks for your inspiring words, it is so encouraging .I shall follow
your advise.
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 10:29 AM
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TAPS, thanks for you wonderful comment expressing all that I wanted to say
posted by
afzal50
on August 24, 2006 at 10:27 AM
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afzal
sometimes when we try hard to rhyme the poem doesn't flow as naturally as it should...let yourself go, forget about rhyming, and simply pour your heart out! You are good and you can be great if you speak from the heart and not the mind.
posted by
cosy
on August 24, 2006 at 10:09 AM
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Afzal, telling the truth is seldom easy but it is worth it.
I love you, and because I love you, I would sooner have you hate me for telling you the truth than adore me me for telling you lies. (Aretino)
posted by
TAPS.
on August 24, 2006 at 9:46 AM
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