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Nautikos

 

Indeed you do, amigo! Hate the goddamned place!

posted by ariel70 on June 11, 2006 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

...truly great writing here, Ariel !!!

posted by reasons on June 11, 2006 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel,

do I hear your own voice in Don Miguel's plaintive words about 'that sunless, fogbound and heretic country'? No matter, a great story, and I am eagerly waiting for the next one.

And had you paid more attention to Juan, it simply would have been a different story, not necessarily better, nor worse, just different...

posted by Nautikos on June 10, 2006 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

He was a very pious son. Good story.

(A)

posted by A-and-B on June 10, 2006 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel70
Your stories flow like honey. They are very nice, good writing, very good.

posted by Justi on June 10, 2006 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply