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Nautikos

 

Thank you very much for you comment. Such praise!

posted by ariel70 on May 27, 2006 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel,
amazing, enviable powers of observation! I am captivated and intrigued!

posted by Nautikos on May 26, 2006 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

Rumored

 

Thank you. But it ain't over yet! I'm posting the last part in a few minutes

posted by ariel70 on May 23, 2006 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel..great story...I've read the whole thing through now....
thanks for sharing it with us.....

posted by Rumor on May 23, 2006 at 1:10 PM | link to this | reply

I have missed your beautiful stories

posted by bel_1965 on May 23, 2006 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Wiley

 

Yep, sure enuff, it's a great place to live!

posted by ariel70 on May 23, 2006 at 2:42 AM | link to this | reply

Justi

 

Yes, unfortunately they had to go. But, aha! There is more to come!

Thank you for calling in, and being so kind

posted by ariel70 on May 23, 2006 at 2:42 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel Shame shame
Oh this is a wonderful story, well done. I loved looking at it through your eyes of history and their eyes of future then you took the future away.... Shame - shame. LOL

posted by Justi on May 23, 2006 at 2:18 AM | link to this | reply

ariel70
O.K. now I know I shoud go live there with ya hoss. Schizophrenic land, hey, that sounds like home for me. Dang, you a fine writer, what the heck am I doing here anyway.

posted by WileyJohn on May 22, 2006 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply




posted by A-and-B on May 22, 2006 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

A 'n' B

 

You really must pay attention, you know. How do you expect to get good grades if you permit things outside the classroom to distract your attention. Oh dear, oh dear!

And don't let me see your room untidy again, either!

posted by ariel70 on May 22, 2006 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, I forgot the author of the story was Alex. Read you again soon.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on May 22, 2006 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

B

 

Do you mean Alex having ESP?

Whoever you mean, nothing is quite what it appears to be. But all will be revealed in the denouement

Thank you for dropping in again

posted by ariel70 on May 22, 2006 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

If Peter has ESP, then you're suggesting that his real life will follow his story "The Lovers". He dies in the company of his perfect woman.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on May 22, 2006 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

Mam'selle

 

You could always print it, and read it in the bath, or on the beach. Do let me know what you think, eh?

posted by ariel70 on May 22, 2006 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  You weren't kidding!

I am going to have to read this, like, on the "installment plan".

"Genius at play."

posted by Mademoiselle on May 22, 2006 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply