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That is wonderful writing, mneme and muser's comment is just perfect. I could not say any better than she what it makes me feel.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 10, 2006 at 6:05 AM
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Thank you Blanche01
it really does feel that way.. so different from my home, and not at all mine unless with someone special to share it.
posted by
mneme
on April 29, 2006 at 5:53 PM
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Mneme is a beautiful name,
I'm often driven out of public places by shrieking girls, too. I love the last line, the alien landscape is palpable.
posted by
Blanche.
on April 29, 2006 at 3:37 PM
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mneme,often!Two nights this week I stayed up all night writing!
posted by
muser
on April 29, 2006 at 8:58 AM
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worth staying up..
just thought I'd check before going to sleep - yes, it was a bit surreal.. do you find your thoughts never, ever stop?
posted by
mneme
on April 29, 2006 at 5:46 AM
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a scene from the ordinary external plays against the same backdrop in the
depth of your emotional internal...scenes and layers...I could feel the ordinary beginning to fade into the ethereal realm of memory...daydreams
posted by
muser
on April 29, 2006 at 5:30 AM
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