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Priveacy for sale is more apt because the ones who gossip are traders of hurts....

posted by abhilasha on April 18, 2006 at 4:35 AM | link to this | reply

Number one
is more apt

posted by Azur on April 15, 2006 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Hmm intresting
Thank reminds me of a song by Prince called Old Friends 4 Sale. ~Silly

posted by SillySoul88 on April 13, 2006 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

sale, definitely--even when it's not for money
gossip is always exchanged for something

posted by brettnik on April 13, 2006 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Shypettite
A very good description of gossip.

posted by TAPS. on April 12, 2006 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

both are good.. prefer first..

posted by MasonGarrett on April 10, 2006 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Ending 1 for definite.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on April 10, 2006 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Privacy for sale.

posted by KrystalDMonroe on April 10, 2006 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Well, they create two different meanings ...

so, it's hard to compare.  However, I think "Privacy for sale" flows a little better.

I've got sunshine in a bag.
I'm useless
But not for long ...
My future
Is coming on.

posted by Mademoiselle on April 9, 2006 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply