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Hello it is quite an age now I have not read you. This morning I have not either, but just wanted to show signs that I am back. I find time to read you during the day. Please do have a nice weekend. God Bless
posted by
Flame-thrower
on March 10, 2006 at 11:02 PM
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Paragraph 3 works very well to suck us into the mind of Susan without giving too much away. I liked the Pollock metaphor. Writing tutors always say, 'Show, don't tell' and I think you've done that well here. You had me thinking rape, then childhood abuse, then claustrophia, then finally, with the Miss Havisham reference, a jilting at the altar.
Moving to Part 2 now. Thoroughly engaging writing, Terry.
Hope you're improving just a bit more each day with your health.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on March 7, 2006 at 1:07 AM
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Lovelyladymonk
Thank you for your comment, and your continuing support. hell of a lot of new folks in Blogit now, aren't there? Kinda makes me feel like some ancient sage of the blogging world. Well, let's face it, I am ancient!
Which, I guess, explains how right at the moment, I can't believe how debilitated I feel, and how sorely lacking in energy and get up an go. I've spent hardly any time blogging lately ; well not since before Christmas, really, so I'm a bit out of touch. And I hope that people don't think too badly of me for not replying to their kind comments.
Still, hope springs eternal in the human breast, and I guess things can only get better.
posted by
ariel70
on March 5, 2006 at 4:18 AM
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Babe Rocks
Many thanks for you comment, and your continuing support, which is greatly appreciated.
Right at the moment, I can't believe how debilitated I feel, and how sorely lacking in energy and get up an go. I've spent hardly any time blogging lately ; well not since before Christmas, really, so I'm a bit out of touch. And I hope that people don't think too badly of me for not replying to their kind comments.
Still, hope springs eternal in the human breast, and I guess things can only get better.
posted by
ariel70
on March 5, 2006 at 4:14 AM
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Was just thinking today that you hadn't been around for a while. Good to see u.
posted by
babe_rocks
on March 3, 2006 at 4:59 PM
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So good to have you back, Ariel!!...
...How are you?....
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on March 3, 2006 at 4:57 PM
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