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MsVision
I especially liked this post. Isn't it about time for another? Good work.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 6, 2006 at 9:47 PM
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MsVison
I love night diving, it's the best and you see more critters.
Thank you for visiting my post..I really apprecitate you impute!!!
posted by
Offy
on March 6, 2006 at 3:30 AM
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nice job. Night diving is the scariest. Lake diving is boring.Diving isn't for everyone but a good place to have stuff happen in a book.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on March 1, 2006 at 12:35 AM
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This is good -
What is your target audience? It feels like you should be writing for teens, 12-18 years...
posted by
Passionflower
on February 28, 2006 at 8:21 AM
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Thanks everyone for your encouraging words
When I am very tired, like now your comments warm me and give me the inspiration to write again soon. Writing is a pasion
that I have to juggle with family responsibilities, a day job, keeping fit and healthy and spending time with my friends. Thank you for visiting and reading.
posted by
MsVision
on February 28, 2006 at 4:16 AM
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Great Work
Saw that you stopped by my site the other day and decided to check you out. Surprise, another great writer reborn. Your story could turn into a book , unless you have thought of heading down that road already. I am looking forward to reading your next piece of work. Have a great day.
posted by
qutiepie58
on February 27, 2006 at 9:25 AM
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I agree...it does read like a book...well done!
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 26, 2006 at 5:07 PM
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What I like best about your writing in PURE BLUE
is how skillfully you move from the internal environment of the characters' shifting emotions and psychological states to the external environment of the tropical setting. The fluid sensitivity of the one reads for me as a perfect complement to the lush living density of the other. Also, in many ways, the setting seems as much a character with individual quirks and nuances as the people. Good enjoyable work on many levels.
Aberjhani
posted by
Aberjhani
on February 26, 2006 at 2:12 PM
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Okay. I think you should post twice a day.
It's like reading a good book, and having someone take it away til tomorrow. Great writing dear. And thank you for the advice on the dialogue. So far it has come in handy.
posted by
KrystalDMonroe
on February 26, 2006 at 11:23 AM
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