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I think your poem was wonderfully well written, but also very sad that a little girl would blame herself for her dad not being man enough to stay and see his little girl grow up into the wonderful woman that I am sure she would become.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on June 1, 2007 at 12:55 AM
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well written...
very touching...
posted by
kushie
on February 2, 2006 at 7:09 AM
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avant--
yes, people can carry all sorts of misconceptions through life based on childhood experiences.
posted by
Julia.
on November 23, 2005 at 12:43 PM
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DeadMan--
Sorry, it does make me sad too!!
posted by
Julia.
on November 23, 2005 at 12:42 PM
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Katray--
thanks for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on November 23, 2005 at 12:41 PM
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Quirky
It seems like I've read this one before, but it is very good and worth rereading.
It is easy to see how little girls can shame themselves and grow up thinking that they are deserving of the men they get involved with.
posted by
avant-garde
on November 23, 2005 at 5:31 AM
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Quirky
Very powerful poem but it ripped me apart inside. Well written.
posted by
bwFrampton
on November 23, 2005 at 5:12 AM
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So sad and poignant Quirky
posted by
Katray2
on November 22, 2005 at 8:49 PM
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Masky and Cat--
thanks for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on November 22, 2005 at 11:06 AM
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that's heartbreaking... but well done.
posted by
-blackcat
on November 22, 2005 at 9:58 AM
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Love, Masky
posted by
Masky
on November 22, 2005 at 9:52 AM
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