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tin23--
thanks very much for reading!!
posted by
Julia.
on November 20, 2005 at 4:10 PM
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Hi
I thought that this poem was really good. It expressed such positive emotions and i think that's great. Thanks for posting this.
posted by
tin23
on November 20, 2005 at 7:57 AM
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abhilasha--
If I didn't share the work I felt still needed work, I would have nothing to post!! lol. thanks for the visit and comment.
posted by
Julia.
on November 16, 2005 at 3:29 PM
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Original--
thanks for dropping in and leaving a comment, too!
posted by
Julia.
on November 16, 2005 at 3:28 PM
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kellyrose--
No, I didn't do that overtly or even, consciously...but I do see what you mean.
posted by
Julia.
on November 16, 2005 at 3:27 PM
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the poem is nice and very true
but if you think you still need to work on it do it till you are satisfied,i also do the same.And i'm glad you dare to share the work that seems incomplete to you... that needs guts.keep it up.
posted by
abhilasha
on November 16, 2005 at 4:49 AM
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Wow, that first paragraph struck home.
posted by
Original_Influence
on November 16, 2005 at 4:31 AM
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potential
my intent is not to belittle, but i am wondering if you are using such blatant stereotypes for effect. the girl and the boy cast strictly in their sex roles, and old people being tired to live, and in rocking chairs? there's more to life than that!
i do like the flow and the rhyth, and your wording evokes images rather than reaction to words.
kelly
posted by
kellyrose
on November 13, 2005 at 11:29 AM
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Riverside, Avant, Dryten and Ebb-Flow--
thank you all very much for reading my poem!
posted by
Julia.
on November 12, 2005 at 1:28 PM
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beautiful.....Quirky.
posted by
Riverside
on November 12, 2005 at 12:31 PM
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pretty Quirky poetry if you ask me. Ask me!! Ask me!!! great
posted by
dryten
on November 11, 2005 at 5:41 PM
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Quirky
Splendid!
posted by
avant-garde
on November 11, 2005 at 6:56 AM
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Superb progression... nice simple imagery coupled with complex ideology
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on November 10, 2005 at 9:13 PM
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Symphony--
Thanks for coming by and reading my poem!!
posted by
Julia.
on November 10, 2005 at 9:01 AM
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I really love it....
posted by
_Symphony_
on November 9, 2005 at 5:43 AM
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Brimstone--
thank you very much for your lovely comment!
posted by
Julia.
on November 8, 2005 at 7:11 PM
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MysticG--
I sympathize, I regard moving as one of life's most unpleasant events.
posted by
Julia.
on November 8, 2005 at 7:11 PM
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Ben--
Yes, that's true, and it's a wonderful statement!!
posted by
Julia.
on November 8, 2005 at 7:10 PM
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Quirky...
Personally, I think this is just fine. It tells a great lesson to the many ages. I feel courage and acceptance in this piece.
By all means, if you feel that you need to hone this, go right ahead. I, however, read a bit of "heart" that was put into this work and, to me, that is what this art is all about.
Very nice! 
posted by
bwFrampton
on November 7, 2005 at 4:41 PM
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quirky
me too! but i fear its a rather drawn out process, with the end a long way off...the other side of the country to be exact
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on November 7, 2005 at 3:31 PM
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If we respect ourselves as divine beings, we might actually strive harder to maintain that kind of respect in everything we do.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on November 7, 2005 at 2:08 PM
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Ann and Straightforward--
thank you very much for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on November 7, 2005 at 8:39 AM
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MysticG--
I hope you get settled soon so you can be here a little more.
posted by
Julia.
on November 7, 2005 at 8:38 AM
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Liked the poem, Quirky
posted by
Straightforward
on November 7, 2005 at 12:25 AM
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quirky-girl
i've missed you. been so very busy with this endless selling the house and moving stuff. Good job. The thought is well threaded, you can play with it from there and see where it takes you, thoughts lead, other thougths follow. Play with your dancing words
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on November 6, 2005 at 6:17 PM
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Good poem. It embraces all walks of life.
(A)
posted by
A-and-B
on November 6, 2005 at 5:19 PM
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Brisbane--
thanks, that was a nice thing to say!
posted by
Julia.
on November 5, 2005 at 4:22 PM
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Quirky Alone
Do not stop writing your poetry
It is a gift to the world, 
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on November 5, 2005 at 1:21 PM
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katray--
posted by
Julia.
on November 4, 2005 at 11:11 PM
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kushie--
thanks very much for the compliment!
posted by
Julia.
on November 4, 2005 at 11:10 PM
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RAME--
thanks for reading, I appreciate your feedback!
posted by
Julia.
on November 4, 2005 at 7:05 PM
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Bright--
thank you very much, I like that you like the thoughts.
posted by
Julia.
on November 4, 2005 at 7:04 PM
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Ohh, I like the truths in this Quirky
Excellent message and form.
posted by
Katray2
on November 4, 2005 at 6:22 PM
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Incredible...
Some great expression in your poem...I enjoyed reading this...Thanks!
posted by
kushie
on November 4, 2005 at 3:16 PM
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Quirky,
This is a beautiful and insightful poem. Great work.
posted by
RAME
on November 4, 2005 at 12:30 PM
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Quirky, I really like the thoughts that you've expressed in your poem. 
posted by
BrightIrish
on November 4, 2005 at 12:26 PM
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