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Ariel,substitute baleful for evil at evil eye.
posted by
longjohnjohn
on November 4, 2005 at 10:30 AM
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Her leprous skin the colour of milk
To the touch the texture of silk
To touch too much is to die
Warm in the glow of her evil eye.
Nothing ventured nothing failed.
posted by
longjohnjohn
on November 4, 2005 at 5:55 AM
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Sorry, Ariel, I'm not much of a poet!
posted by
Nickie-Fleming
on November 4, 2005 at 2:24 AM
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Ariel70...this is all I could come up with...didn't know if you wanted
multiple stanzas to end it our just one. Here's my thoughts...
Tattered structure upon her skin;
crystal amulet below her chin
hung down upon her fertile breast
where souls of fools lay down to rest
Arachne, never true to love
to fools, to crooks, to vagabonds
consumes the will and breadth of man
She stands before me, bathed in red
A demanding nuance broad of fire
Resolve amidst demon desire
She hovers up atop the flame
Evils hide within her name.
posted by
Masky
on November 3, 2005 at 4:53 PM
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Beware the fair
It's but a lair.
Return to Spain,
Relieve your pain!!
posted by
reasons
on November 3, 2005 at 3:53 PM
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great game... unfortunately, I can't play now!
posted by
-blackcat
on November 3, 2005 at 3:21 PM
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Ariel70 offers a challenge...dang it. I need to put a 3rd coat of paint
on my foyer walls. Shoot. Write? Paint? Write? Paint? Okay...I accept the challenge. What a great idea, Ariel 70.
posted by
Masky
on November 3, 2005 at 2:46 PM
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