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Very nice story!

posted by Original_Influence on November 3, 2005 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

What a wonderful story

Moving, compelling one forgets that it is an animal that is dying and you feel for it as you would a person.

posted by fionajean on November 2, 2005 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

Justsouno

Thank you for your comment on my story. You have nothing to apolgise for. i shall read your post again later on, and perhaps frame my comments in a more clear and understandable way

posted by ariel70 on October 31, 2005 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel70

This is a beautiful story. I want to discuss with you what I wrote and your comment. I am sorry we have a misunderstanding. I ask your forgivness. I don't see what you are writing so we will have to go over it again. I did not write what you read but I know there is a wrongness in it for it to come across to you the way it did. Will you come back and point that out to me? Thank you.

posted by Justi on October 31, 2005 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel, good post; the goat could even be metaphor

for a human death with dignity vs death after heroic medical treatments. We are both of the '31 cohort, so its probably a topic of interest to both of us. ARGUS

posted by ARGUS on October 30, 2005 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel,

I liked this. I started to suspect somewhere along the way, that you were writing about an animal, but the suspense kept me going. Good post.

posted by Blanche. on October 30, 2005 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

thanks

for comment and reading my blog. I had actually read quite a bit of yours one day but didn't know how to comment then.

posted by babe_rocks on October 30, 2005 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

mcbreeze

Ah, so we've got to put up with you again, have we? Great to see your name in here again!

No doubt it's all that booze, sex, rock 'n' roll, class A substances and ... ( well, I won't detail your depraved lifestyle too much, 'cos there might be some young innocents in here ) that has caused you to forget my gender.