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Original_Influence
Thank you, so much!  I really appreciate that!...and thanks for reading.

posted by Krisles on October 19, 2005 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent ! So very good!

posted by Original_Influence on October 19, 2005 at 6:38 PM | link to this | reply

Hemlocker
You humble me, sir.....thank you so very much.  I guess I am very much a romantic in many, many ways.....and then I turn around and my pragmatic nature causes many to stop and stare.  Of course, I don't see a conflict.....I wouldn't take for the good times that have come with the bad; it seems most of us can't have one without the other....at least not in real life.....perhaps I do need to try some fiction - just for a lark!  Thanks again, so much Hemlocker.

posted by Krisles on October 19, 2005 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

For gosh sakes, Krisles,
CunningLinguist is so right about you being the queen of romance.  Are you a noted romance novelist going incognito on Blogit?  If not, get to work, lady!  There's a lot of published stuff out there that doesn't approach your eloquence in this area~.  Hemlocker

posted by Hemlocker on October 19, 2005 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

Krisles--
This did look familiar--but the warm and sincere expressiveness has not waned.  Hemlocker

posted by Hemlocker on October 19, 2005 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

I love this--how beautifully expressed it was...and I like that it ends on a hopeful note instead of how mine would end, still in the despairing mood...lol...this was really, really good!!

posted by Julia. on October 19, 2005 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

I'm not familiar with that song I don't think. At least, not from those lyrics you wrote. I'm not an expert in love, but I am in love ;-)

The person who has the potential to hurt you the most is the one you give the most of You to. The alternative is to never experience that flying. It don't mean a thing if you ain't got that swing.

DJ

posted by CunningLinguist on October 18, 2005 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Cunning
As so often, we are in accord in our thinking.....and I hadn't seen that take on the word intimacy....thanks for sharing that....I love it!  You know how often I evoke flying and swinging (as in real swinging!)....and they do so go with love, I think.  Now, have you heard that line from a wonderful song....I think I've got it as my favorite quote on my page...."One should never fall in love, but rise to the occasion"....  I see multiple meanings behind those words...besides the obvious noble one.  Too many folks seem to shy away from the potential of getting hurt, once they have been....such a shame....each time up to bat, your odds of really knockin'  it out of the park are better - well, that's my take on the situation anyway...

posted by Krisles on October 18, 2005 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Love leaves us at our most vulnerable.

it's the ultimate risk, because you're investing the sum of your being into one person.  Intimacy, into-me-see, as the saying goes.  You don't fall in love, you fly in love.  And the higher you get, the scarier the potential fall is.  But you're 'in love' so you don't even recognize the possibility of a fall.  The greatest reward naturally requires the greatest amount of risk.  Love is worth it, and love gives you wings.

DJ

posted by CunningLinguist on October 18, 2005 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

Melody

Thank you sooooo much.....you humble me.  Sometimes, the inspiration fairy whacks me over the head and it spills out.....others, I just sit.....I sit a lot.....

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

WHOA!
Krisles, I especially like the soft sensuality and soulfulness in this poem.  Lady, you are the queen of romance.    Beautifully spoken.     Melody

posted by CunningLinguist on October 17, 2005 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

Blackcat
Thank you.....but, I don't really see it as sad....I wouldn't take for the experience, not one second of it.  Sure it hurt...hurt like hell....but I survived, and like I say, I was ready to go again...that's the nature of love; "every step I took.....". Like I just told Mike, I'm a firm believer in "no guts, no glory"....and the glory was WONDERFUL!!!!!

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

mikebrown
Ohhhh, sweetness.....come here and let me ((((hug)))).  I'm not at all surprised.....you're too adorable not to have broken some hearts and, karma being what it is, had it returned.  I've always thought that one of the great things about experience is that you learn you do survive; hopefully, that gives you the "no guts, no glory" confidence to keep goin' until you find the angel who will keep your heart in her hands.....along with all the other parts you like so much.... - glad you liked it! 

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

really good... but sad...

posted by -blackcat on October 17, 2005 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

i like it
this may surprise you, but i have had my heart broken by a few little fillies myself.  i remember almost being shocked to remember that i'm still the same me as i was before (albeit with a slightly battered ego).

posted by mikebrown on October 17, 2005 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

Passion...ignore reference to swish...I was so excited to see you....

I forgot which post I was answering you in!!  You just made my day dropping in! Timmy came back today, too....his dad had surgery and he's been out awhile.  I'll go see if you've done an update post.  Dang!  I'm sooo excited to talk to you....

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

PASSION! PASSION! PASSION! (Sorry, but I can't help shoutin'!!!)
I miss you so much and here you are!  Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed.....I know you have a mean swish!  Are you coming home anytime soon?  I'm going to Irving 11/9.....dang!  I mean it....I miss you..((((HUG)))))

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Kris....loved this! It's amazing...
Didn't realize you were such a good poet.

posted by Passionflower on October 17, 2005 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

Ariala
Thank you.....and yes it was.....I've been thinking a lot about that time, reminding myself....I appreciate your letting me know you felt it.

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

Shadow
Thank you so much....that's my memory of that relationship....wonderful how time past works like that.

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:17 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles, truly heartfelt...

posted by Ariala on October 17, 2005 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles,

This is beautiful. Shadow

posted by Keshet on October 17, 2005 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply