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Adaman,
thanks for your comment, I guess if it makes you believe that I (or someone) would do it, then it has acheived the desired purpose...although, I personally would never do it.

posted by Julia. on October 19, 2005 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, Quirky, I want to shout, "Don't do it!" Life is in you today, and you

make your tomorrow!  (Great poem to evoke such a desperate attempt at salvation.)

posted by Adaman on October 18, 2005 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

Maggie--
Thanks!

posted by Julia. on October 18, 2005 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

posted by MaggieMae on October 18, 2005 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony--
what a nice thing to say, and I thank you from the bottom of my quirky poetic heart. Well, I think I am improving from the "early days" last year--hehe--it is an art form, I wonder if anyone ever feels like they have mastered it?

posted by Julia. on October 17, 2005 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Original--
thanks for letting me know you dropped by!

posted by Julia. on October 17, 2005 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply

thug85--
my pleasure.

posted by Julia. on October 17, 2005 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

Very well written.
your poetry is wonderful.......I remember you saying you are not a poet....but YOU SO ARE!

posted by _Symphony_ on October 17, 2005 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful...sad...

posted by Original_Influence on October 16, 2005 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

thanks for the comment it means a lot to me =]

posted by lilaznthug85 on October 16, 2005 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

Tandra--

thank you for that *very* creative comment!

posted by Julia. on October 16, 2005 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Sad, but I love it...your stab at poetic expression was very well-aimed!

posted by Tandra on October 15, 2005 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

katray--thank you my friend!
your first line sounds like a blurb on a video box...lol.

posted by Julia. on October 15, 2005 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

lilaznthug85--
thank you very much for checking out my poem!

posted by Julia. on October 15, 2005 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Bright--
thanks for reading, it's only sad if it really happens!

posted by Julia. on October 15, 2005 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

Hauntingly romantic and tragic
Nice work Quirky.

posted by Katray2 on October 14, 2005 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

great but sad

posted by lilaznthug85 on October 14, 2005 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Quirky....
So beautiful and yet so sad.

posted by BrightIrish on October 14, 2005 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply