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katray, adaman and mysticG--
thank you for reading my lonely little poem with no name.
posted by
Julia.
on September 19, 2005 at 11:10 AM
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Quirky-girl
Nice! Good poem. You write poetry well, i'm surprised you've only been exploring it a short time. pretty good fit i'd say....you do well with sparce words, thats a goal not always attained. 
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 18, 2005 at 9:15 PM
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This is a beautiful, heart-warming poem. Very nicely crafted, too!
posted by
Adaman
on September 18, 2005 at 3:17 AM
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Quirky
That's alright... in my perspective, everything is a work in progress. I would say only about 5% of what I write is something I would show to somebody right away... all the rest is like hacking your way through a steep jungle trail, smoothing out the path, finding out what's in your way and how to get around it
-M
posted by
MaxWest
on September 12, 2005 at 12:27 PM
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Very Nice little poem Quirky
posted by
Katray2
on September 11, 2005 at 6:57 PM
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Alf--
well my poetry always leaves room for improvement, but it's coming along. thanks for reading.
posted by
Julia.
on September 11, 2005 at 1:42 PM
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Quirky...
I like this poem, I like the way it sounds when you read it, and its clear meaning.
posted by
A_Norseman
on September 11, 2005 at 1:07 PM
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MysticG--
thanks for reading my lonely no-name poem.
posted by
Julia.
on September 11, 2005 at 12:48 PM
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quirky
very nice, very pleasant
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 11, 2005 at 12:18 PM
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gubby--
thank you, that's very nice, and of course I don't disapprove.
posted by
Julia.
on September 9, 2005 at 10:06 AM
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devin--
thanks for reading my poem!
posted by
Julia.
on September 9, 2005 at 10:04 AM
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*people list.
posted by
Gubby
on September 9, 2005 at 9:24 AM
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Oh, I added you to my blog list, shout if you disapprove of my name being connected to yours or anything...
posted by
Gubby
on September 9, 2005 at 9:24 AM
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Very nice!
I tend to write poetry about everything else but love because I find it easier to be quirky about other subjects! You've captured the warmth of love very well.
posted by
devinmitchell
on September 8, 2005 at 8:36 PM
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thank you Max--
like all of my poems, I seem to keep working them over. I'm not that happy with the second half.
posted by
Julia.
on September 8, 2005 at 2:03 PM
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MysticG--thanks.
I'm a little newbie poet, still trying to find my wings...but it's an interesting journey.
posted by
Julia.
on September 8, 2005 at 2:02 PM
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I especially liked
the first half of this- liked the resizing of the text and line length to enhance the "floating" effect
-M
posted by
MaxWest
on September 8, 2005 at 1:29 PM
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quirky-girl
i really like that. YOu write good poetry!
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 8, 2005 at 10:29 AM
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