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redlunar--
thank you for your most wonderful compliment. I admire your poetic skill very much, so for you to say this, means a lot to me.
posted by
Julia.
on September 6, 2005 at 9:44 AM
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Schree-
Thank you again!
posted by
Julia.
on September 6, 2005 at 9:43 AM
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Quirky,
very nice. It is difficult to write a love poem between two lovers and not sound trite. You have managed to attain that here. It is always imperative that as a poet, we try to describe a simple thing like love in a new way, with unusual language or metaphor. Something to thing about. red
posted by
redlunar
on September 6, 2005 at 9:11 AM
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I'm catching up on your other stuff and had to re-read this..I love it!!
:-) Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 5, 2005 at 12:47 PM
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Scree--
thanks for reading, glad you liked it!
posted by
Julia.
on September 5, 2005 at 12:27 PM
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Hey that's great!
That's a wonderful poem..Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 5, 2005 at 11:57 AM
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thanks for the compliment mcbreeze--
I'm glad you liked it!
posted by
Julia.
on August 31, 2005 at 8:19 AM
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Symphony--
thank you, you're very sweet!
posted by
Julia.
on August 31, 2005 at 8:18 AM
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no need for improvement here this was a fantastic reminder of a programme
we had on here recently called "Sugar Rush" a lesbian one it was beuatifully done and very sensual just like this poem is thnx xxx
posted by
mcbreeze
on August 31, 2005 at 4:14 AM
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ahh this is lovely....I think it is fine the way it is...
posted by
_Symphony_
on August 31, 2005 at 4:03 AM
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