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Quirky!
Vivid, indeed! Now keep writing. I can't believe you haven't posted in here since March.
posted by
phonetic_semen
on July 28, 2005 at 3:08 PM
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Phonetic--
I guess it's just a vivid fantasy.
posted by
Julia.
on July 28, 2005 at 10:47 AM
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Quirky
Interesting piece...
From the beginning it seems that you know this person and then at the end you say "If only you were real."
I can't tell if it is someone you know and aren't physical with or if he's simply made up.
Great composition, though.
posted by
phonetic_semen
on July 27, 2005 at 10:40 PM
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Thanks Symphony!
posted by
Julia.
on March 8, 2005 at 10:00 PM
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Yeah Tanoo,
That is a pretty big "if" isn't it?
posted by
Julia.
on March 8, 2005 at 5:52 PM
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so beautiful...yet so sad
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 8, 2005 at 1:42 PM
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if ony.........
posted by
Tanoolicious
on March 8, 2005 at 1:26 PM
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