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gypsy...
yes I sure will, it's a long way down, hehe. Thanks for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 11:09 AM
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Symphony, thanks...
that is good to know.
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 11:09 AM
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Quirkyalone lol
you ...being there was enough...thank you so much
posted by
_Symphony_
on December 2, 2004 at 10:33 AM
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Symphony,
I went to comfort your lonely poem...but I have only mere words and no smiling, dancing thingys. Hope that will suffice, lol.
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 10:30 AM
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I liked this!
You have a great way of letting the reader see what you're seeing. Watch out for that last step!
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on December 2, 2004 at 10:25 AM
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my poems are lonely too
my poems know how your poems feel....and my poem offers your poem and you a
posted by
_Symphony_
on December 2, 2004 at 10:23 AM
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Symphony,
thanks for reading another of my "poor little lonely poems" --lolol.
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 10:20 AM
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I like this one
posted by
_Symphony_
on December 2, 2004 at 10:08 AM
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Alf, thanks.
It goes something like hip-hip-hooray but with a quirky flourish of the hand, lol. Now, if only I could write love poems as swoon-inducing as you can! Something to work on, for sure.
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 9:04 AM
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Quirky...
Very nice, I especially liked the ending.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 8:58 AM
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