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Marivye,
Actually, I'm sorry to say, it was.
posted by
Julia.
on November 15, 2004 at 4:28 PM
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This is absolutely heartbreaking.
Please don't tell me this was written by your inner child.
posted by
MariVye
on November 15, 2004 at 12:46 PM
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Wolf-Girl,
thank you for reading it.
posted by
Julia.
on November 15, 2004 at 9:42 AM
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Symphony,
thank you so much.
posted by
Julia.
on November 14, 2004 at 4:00 PM
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Tanoo,
I know, sorry...
posted by
Julia.
on November 14, 2004 at 3:59 PM
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Tragically sad but beautifully expressed.
posted by
Wolf-Girl
on November 14, 2004 at 3:46 PM
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Sky,
well actually, most of the time I try to forget my Dad.
posted by
Julia.
on November 14, 2004 at 1:25 PM
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so so so so so sad
I can relate...I understand.................expressed so well
posted by
_Symphony_
on November 14, 2004 at 6:43 AM
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this is so heartbreakingly sad
posted by
Tanoolicious
on November 14, 2004 at 4:14 AM
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it is so sad,..........i remember my dad too.
posted by
Star5_
on November 13, 2004 at 9:51 PM
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Brimstone,
thanks for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on November 13, 2004 at 9:30 PM
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Sad poem...
a good poem, but a tearjerker!
Fine job!
posted by
bwFrampton
on November 12, 2004 at 6:46 PM
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Alf,
thanks for the compliment.
posted by
Julia.
on November 12, 2004 at 6:30 PM
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Quirky...
This is beautifully heartwrenching.......well done.
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 12, 2004 at 5:43 PM
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