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quirky.....yes ...i read the older version which i am now commenting on and
i do like the newer version better even....though i did like this one.........especially the way you revised the lines about the pearls.........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 8:42 PM
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Ariala,
thank you very much for that!
I bow before you and kiss your pretty, poetic feet.
posted by
Julia.
on November 12, 2004 at 12:04 PM
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Quirky, more, more, more!! Great job!
posted by
Ariala
on November 12, 2004 at 11:19 AM
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Ben,
Oh, I know you did, I was just adding unnecessary commentary, lol.
posted by
Julia.
on November 12, 2004 at 9:50 AM
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I think I understand
this imagery and satire.
Its okay,
no need for explanations.
Ben
posted by
A-and-B
on November 7, 2004 at 9:34 PM
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Ben,
she had no choice but to fly away.
posted by
Julia.
on November 7, 2004 at 9:29 PM
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Wise moth.
Evolution with the changing times.
Ben
posted by
A-and-B
on November 7, 2004 at 8:51 PM
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Tapsel-T,
Thank you soooooo much!
posted by
Julia.
on November 6, 2004 at 10:22 PM
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Alf,
well then...I don't know it! But thank you for what I consider a great compliment.
posted by
Julia.
on November 6, 2004 at 6:03 PM
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Symphony,
thanks very much!
posted by
Julia.
on November 6, 2004 at 6:01 PM
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To Poet Quirky - That one's great.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 6, 2004 at 3:08 PM
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Nice Quirky...I agree with wolf-girl, you are a poet.
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 6, 2004 at 2:51 PM
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this is wonderfully written
well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on November 6, 2004 at 6:37 AM
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Wolf-Girl,
Ah....
Thanks!
posted by
Julia.
on November 5, 2004 at 8:00 PM
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This is great!! I think you're more of a poet than you give yourself credit for.
posted by
Wolf-Girl
on November 5, 2004 at 7:13 PM
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Melodystar,
thanks!!
posted by
Julia.
on November 5, 2004 at 10:01 AM
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I love it.
posted by
Melodystar
on November 5, 2004 at 9:37 AM
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