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You expressed this very well
posted by
beachbelle
on August 21, 2004 at 4:56 AM
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thank you truly, little ms. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 16, 2004 at 7:56 PM
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great poem temple
posted by
littlemspickles
on August 16, 2004 at 5:50 AM
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Symphony, I love to hear that! It's part of the reason I write.
Thank you. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 10, 2004 at 9:38 PM
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Wenchy, I think the gifts we give each other than can't fit in boxes
are the ones that make us grow as people....find out happiness. When someone takes it and runs without thought, it's like stealing, don't you think? Being stolen from by someone you trust cuts deep. I wait for the opportunity that remains tangled in this. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 10, 2004 at 9:37 PM
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very powerful
I feel that I can relate.......................take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on August 10, 2004 at 2:52 PM
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So powerfully written, Temply One, breathtaking really in its
surety of the true worth of such a gift xxxxx.
posted by
Moohahaha
on August 9, 2004 at 9:15 PM
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What a great way to put it EccentricShock!
Weeds in nature may be uncessary but inevitable...on my path they bring some little bit of knowledge to help me get to the next level. Pain in the ass, those little suckers! :)
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2004 at 9:31 PM
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well done!
I hope you path has been weeded..
posted by
EccentricShock
on August 7, 2004 at 8:15 PM
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Such truth there, jimmy...
The struggle against inevitability is like taking on quicksand in snow shoes. Sometimes their struggle takes us down with them. Heavy is the path sometimes, the price we pay for bright wonderous moments of truth. I give myself over to inevitable illumination even at such cost. The price of safety is my soul and it's offerings.
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2004 at 12:34 AM
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Thanks Cass. I'll take that hug and raise you a martini. ;)
This poem is from a place where I can't even fully articulate thoughts yet. Sometimes people that play "small" roles in our lives leave big footprints...and a bruise or two (only figuratively). :) Brievity casts no reflection on depth.
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2004 at 12:29 AM
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Illumination is inevitable...
but one can remain bound to the wheel for eons without acheiving it. Some struggle longer than others against inevitability. Good to read you, sounds heaavy
posted by
jimmy68
on August 6, 2004 at 9:51 PM
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Temple - I don't know what to say, I'm too moved by this one. I'm wishing I could give you a big hug right now.
posted by
Ca88andra
on August 6, 2004 at 6:56 PM
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Temple,
Ditto. shadow
posted by
Keshet
on August 6, 2004 at 8:56 AM
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I can't take credit for that, Shadow.
It must have been the universe working...this was about my situation recently. I'm glad that it felt good to you, too. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 5, 2004 at 2:14 PM
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Temple,
This is definitely going into my favorites. You can always explain what I am feeling. Somthing so hard for me to do. shadow
posted by
Keshet
on August 5, 2004 at 1:58 PM
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