Poetry & Novel Treatments

I'm canceling my subscription indefinitely. I am not receiving the feedback I'm looking for. I thank those who have read my blogs. I am writing a novel and posted a few pages. I plan to have this published by the end of the year. If you want to be the first to see it's final draft, feel free to... Sign in to see full entry.

“Yes. You know him?” “Yes.” He simply answered. Catherine shook her head vigorously and waved her hand for him to continue as if he could see her. “Well?” Gregory remained quiet. “I thought all the O’Doul’s were dead?” “No. There’s him and his son, Stephen. He lives in America though.” “Why does the... Sign in to see full entry.

Catherine’s house was on Stocking Lane facing west and sat on twenty-five acres with grassy knolls as a backyard. Her nearest neighbor other than the one across the street was about ten minutes away in each direction. The townspeople of Aurora, a small town thirty miles from Dublin, Ireland,... Sign in to see full entry.

O’Michaels and Deers raced over to the wounded men and began treating them. Geoffrey got to his feet, gripped Catherine’s arm and steered her away from the crowd to an old oak with enough shade to block the sun. “Wha’ the hell are ya doin’? Ya wanna get caught?” “What do you know?” “I kno’ dat if ya... Sign in to see full entry.

“Ms. Deers. Really I’m fine.” She kept her tone low and calm, still glaring into Deers eyes. After a few moments, she said, “She’s fine, O’Michaels,” and began stepping away from Catherine and Geoffrey. Before O’Michaels could protest, Deers grabbed his arm and pulled him away. Catherine could hear... Sign in to see full entry.

Here's page two of Chapter One: Enjoy! Geoffrey thought about her remark about the sun. No way. She can't be. Well then why would she say that? Doesn't matter, I can't leave her in here. I'll have to keep her out of the sun. He shook off his thoughts and pleaded again, "Please.” He took a deep... Sign in to see full entry.

Here is the first page of chapter One...Let me know what you think and if it catches your attention and interest. Chapter One Catherine Kennedy Kennedy Estates Aurora, Ireland April 3 p.m. “Catherine?” a distant voice with a heavy Irish accent shouted. Footsteps raced up and down the hall, opening... Sign in to see full entry.

Some of you have read my writings under Dominique's Poetry and Writings, Past Life and Vail of Darkness. Some of you are new to my writing and novel treatments. I welcome all feedback but please be polite. I hope you will all come join me on this new trip of Catherine Kennedy in Vail of Darkness.... Sign in to see full entry.