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                    Wow! This is very good as in very well written and my attention is at bay.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Mystereo
                     on May 6, 2009 at 6:41 PM
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                I like how it has started! I can't wait until you say it is finished! You have put the work in! sam 
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on April 10, 2009 at 11:10 AM
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