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Friday, May 11, 2012

Which Word, When and Why?

The words you use to are like the body-language of a story: they suggest and imply, and communicate more than their definitions allow. We use certain words in dialogue to convey personality of the speaker. The words you use in narrative reveal your personality as a writer, and also the personality... Sign in to see full entry.

Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Breaking the Rules

The best writers, the authors of best-sellers, of the classics--break the rules. Tolkien would have gotten a fight from a contemporary editor for his pages-long single-speaker narrative in FELLOWSHIP OF THE RING, a scene in which Gandalf describes to a gathering why he missed an appointment. Mark... Sign in to see full entry.

Monday, May 7, 2012

If you have never seen Jacques Tati...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SZGUIpdc0i4&feature=related Take a couple of minutes for this retrospective glance at M.Hulot's Holiday Sign in to see full entry.

Sunday, May 6, 2012

Commas.

Commas? Commas! We need punctuation to make sense of what we read. Punctuations tells something of the sound of the words, the emphasis, and most importantly, what is the relationship of word to word, phrase to phrase. Commas inform as we read, what modifies what, and what does not modify what. When... Sign in to see full entry.

Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Intellect vs Inspiration

This is one of my Writing Workshop topics, addressing the problem of getting past the left-brain's diligent conscious ordering and explication of an idea, to the right-brain's almost effortless expression of the idea. A friend sent me this link today, so I can share it with you:... Sign in to see full entry.

Here's an eye-opening Blogit writer to check out!

Setaki writes of South Africa. I've been delighting in these anecdotal tales very much! If you are familiar with and enjoy Alexander McCall Smith's 'First Ladies Detective Agency' stories, you'll appreciate what Setaki writes, with a similar dry and affectionate and sometimes subtly grim voice, of... Sign in to see full entry.

Sunday, April 29, 2012

Here's a fun dialogue prompt: A most unlikely meeting!

This is going to be one of the exercises in my writing workshop. First, the video... http://www.slothster.com/2352-Cat-On-Boat-Plays-With-Dolphins.html Now, the prompt: Write the conversation that is taking place between these two. Ideally, write it with nothing to pad it out: just the dialogue,... Sign in to see full entry.

Saturday, April 28, 2012

Writer's Workshop: commas

As a reader, I beg you. be aware of when, where, and maybe even why to use commas, and take the time: misplaced punctuation ruins the magic of the storytelling, like your car bottoming out on the road, just when you are enjoying the ride. As an editor, it is maddening to deal with a manuscript that... Sign in to see full entry.

Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Another dog story

I heard about all this recently, in a phone call. My elder-brain being not exactly a sponge, is a little vague on some of the specifics. But the important ones are intact. A friend of mine had a couple of dogs, middle-aged at least. Bandit was a chunky little lady, a smallish breed who was rather... Sign in to see full entry.

Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Alcoholism is the theme...

This is a reprise of a poem I posted some time ago, somewhere or other... but it is easier to pull it from other archives than to go find that page again. I bring it out again because of a post in another blog: http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/tamijo/ Bitter Grapes Wine was once upon a time... Sign in to see full entry.

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