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Re: Annicita

Thanks. I thought I had fixed that, but as my wife often tells me, 'Well, ya didn't!' lol

I did fix it in the manuscript. 

posted by BigV on July 12, 2021 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

Will be thinking about this story today. One of those tales that roll around in the mind after reading. Great work!

posted by adnohr on July 12, 2021 at 9:00 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoy this story. I would love more about her before she marries. Don't forget the apostrophe on lion's den.

posted by Annicita on July 9, 2021 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply