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You captured the essence wonderfully! I wrote a poem a long time ago call Adrift! My son, Christopher, came upon some time later. After he read he said, "This is about me, isn't it? I said yes and to this day it's one of his favorite poems! Score one for the Momma, lol! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 18, 2017 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thanks, Bill! Sometimes it works. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 11, 2017 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you for that, FSI. I appreciate it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 11, 2017 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thanks, Naut! No, not personal experience. It's just a write... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 11, 2017 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

RP

A powerful poem! I just hope the sense of being alone and forever lost is not born of your personal experience...

posted by Nautikos on April 11, 2017 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

Color's used as great imagery love.

posted by BC-A on April 11, 2017 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

You touch upon the senses so well in your poem. Great job.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 11, 2017 at 5:27 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

Gkad you liked it, TAPS! Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 11, 2017 at 2:06 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful thoughts expressed so well.

posted by TAPS. on April 11, 2017 at 1:44 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Nor did I! Thank you, Annicita! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 10, 2017 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

I never knew that....beautiful poem!

posted by Annicita on April 10, 2017 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply