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This poem can act as a true definition of proviso! BRAVO!!!! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 18, 2017 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

It is a sad thing, and so cute how they can perk up. I've never heard of the Dog Prince, though... Hmm? lol.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 8, 2017 at 11:38 AM | link to this | reply

RP

Nothing is as sad as a neglected dog - but kiss him and he may turn into a Prince...

posted by Nautikos on April 7, 2017 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Kabu

OMG, you sound so much like my real-life sis about being truthful. Actually, that's kinda the credo of my family, and we have all suffered for it at times! LOL! I am so honored by what you say, that it takes my breath away in shock. You have my very deep gratitude, S. Sister. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 7, 2017 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Indeed, one does try to do that. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 7, 2017 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: lanetay

You are too funny! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 7, 2017 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

I quite agree, FSI! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 7, 2017 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re:Aba

Thank you, Aba dea. I've been trying to post shorter poems, but that come hard for me. Glad you did enjoy it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 7, 2017 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

I like kabu enjoy your work as well

posted by Annicita on April 7, 2017 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

I ain't ever kind I am always truthful. I adore your work and you. You are able to reach insdie yourself and pull out something so well written that you take my breath away. yes OK I am a fan.

posted by Kabu on April 7, 2017 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

I'm sorry, it is just a poem, dear Kabu. I give myself permission to allow my imagination become my truth, but only when I write (poetry). I really, really wish I could write differently. Thank you for your kindness, as always.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 7, 2017 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Do the best you can in social relationships

posted by BC-A on April 7, 2017 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

yes walk away if it gets unbearable and Hallelujah indeed! I do believe that we are all really really enjoying your poetry.

posted by Kabu on April 7, 2017 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

hot hot love

posted by Lanetay on April 7, 2017 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

An incredible feeling it is when time is suspended in such a way, making it the sort of day or night one hopes will never end.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 7, 2017 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

Presta

This short but sweet poem gladdened me no end, esecially so beautifully highlighted by the words "Hallelujah, bewitching Gypsy kiss, and coaxing the clock to stop". 

posted by anib on April 6, 2017 at 11:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

You make me laugh out loud at my silly poem, dear TAPS! Hallelujah! LOL! Good one, and thank you!  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 6, 2017 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

Hallelujah!  Hallelujah!
Life's like that.  Yeah, it is.

posted by TAPS. on April 6, 2017 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply