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Re: chuck_ibrahim

Thanks, Chuck! Hey, you talking about my family...LOL! (Joking, there. I couldn't resist.)

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 14, 2017 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: strat

Yes, that's part of being human, I think. Probably a good sign... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 14, 2017 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

It's true, stark, plain-wrap. Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 14, 2017 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi Aba

Thank you. I'm glad the close appealed to you, Aba. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 14, 2017 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

Short and beautiful 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on March 14, 2017 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

I often wonder that, actually....

posted by strat on March 14, 2017 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

A poem that is very true to life.

posted by TAPS. on March 14, 2017 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Presta the poetess

I once wrote something that you mention. Probably the title was postcard, but I remember not much of what I wrote. Your close, "I am closing that door" appealed to me a lot. 

posted by anib on March 14, 2017 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thanks, sam. Some of it was real, some was in my memory's trunk. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Glad you enjoyed it, Wiley. Thank you, sir! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Troosha

I don't have many 'things' either. Those I have are little treasures, not monetarily, psychologically. This poem was also about mental images. Thank you for stopping by, Troosha. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

One never knows down the road of time who will give a good damn, dear Kabu, and I'll bet there will be those descendants of yours who do care, that take after you. Things are just things, but 'things' of and from the heart are different. You will see. Five grandchildren is a great legacy for the world. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, one can, at times. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Correct. Thank you, CCT. I'm glad that you like it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Yes. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 13, 2017 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply

As I was reading this I pictured a person in an old attic going through a trunk and reflecting on their life! OUTSTANDING! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 13, 2017 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

I enjoyed that, well written.

posted by WileyJohn on March 13, 2017 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

I don't hang on to many things but I do have a few bits and pieces around my place that take me back to another time - sometimes sad, sometimes happy.  Lovely poem!

posted by Troosha on March 13, 2017 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

I hold my memories close in my heart knowing none who come behind will give a damn.

I dust and cherish a life time of collecting, things that I love dearly that enrich my life. Np one will want them they will end on e-bay one day. It won't matter for 5 Grandchildren are the legacy I will leave this world.

posted by Kabu on March 13, 2017 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

One can feel that way when looking back at the past.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 13, 2017 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

You are not the first to ask RP. The more we learn the the less we want to keep that door open. I like this.

posted by C_C_T on March 13, 2017 at 1:18 AM | link to this | reply

memorabilia....

posted by Annicita on March 12, 2017 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply