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Re: Nautikos
Awhh, thanks much, Naut! Bingo, again! I can see you're nobody's fool! LOL.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:14 PM
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Re: TAPS
Oh, TAPS, thank you for that. I am glad to hear it, very glad.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:12 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Wiley, you are sooo right on that one! Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:11 PM
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Re: FSI
Glad you liked it, FSI. And the backstory, also. I never know...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:09 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Thanks, CC. The eyes are holding up. That's what's important. I have bigger medical fish to fry...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:08 PM
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RP
Excellent! Using a tear as the focal point is very imaginative and alludes to several levels of meaning...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 23, 2017 at 8:08 PM
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Re: Re: Lanetay
Make that "things." Never could type good.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:07 PM
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Re: Lanetay
Thanks, Lanetay. Thinks seem more colorful in a prism. :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:06 PM
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Re: spiderfly
Thank you, spiderfly. It was real.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:06 PM
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Re: sam444
Thanks, sam. You are too kind and generous.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:05 PM
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Re: Hello Aba
Yes, why not? Sounded better than Blur, I thought. :) Hmm, maybe not... Thank you so much. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:04 PM
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Re: manawar
Thank you very much, manawar, for the deep and lovely 
comment. Yes, you have a very clear insight on this poem. I can see that. :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 8:02 PM
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Re: Annicita
Thanks, Annicita!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 23, 2017 at 7:59 PM
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Interesting comment to go with your interesting poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 23, 2017 at 6:05 PM
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RPresta
Well as long as the photo isn't obscura
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 23, 2017 at 1:13 PM
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What lovely imagery scene. A very interesting backstory, too, with your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 23, 2017 at 9:40 AM
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A good poem RP, I wish you could get those eyes fixed though.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2017 at 8:02 AM
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interesting explanation of the poem and very colorful sounding poem
posted by
Lanetay
on February 23, 2017 at 7:31 AM
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Like the way you give an explanation, it brings it real.
posted by
spiderfly
on February 23, 2017 at 5:20 AM
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Stunning conclusion as well as being very captivating! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 22, 2017 at 10:13 PM
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Hello Presta
Camera Obscura, yes indeed ... why not, obscured by the prism of tears. I loved your word-choice 
posted by
anib
on February 22, 2017 at 8:10 PM
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Tears of Prisms
The heart of the spirit of this writers guide Me to see, How My Eyes Reflect clear yet dimly see. Yet Clearly See the Parades of Peoples Death March Parades and Alone To Stand Withing Such Hope, Yet Looking into the eyes of those with not one ounce of hope. Great Write!
posted by
manawar
on February 22, 2017 at 7:07 PM
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great imagery
posted by
Annicita
on February 22, 2017 at 6:02 PM
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Kabu
My camera on the smart phone is pretty good, and eliminates the need to have to carry a second one 
around, but I do like a good camera at times, dear Kabu.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 22, 2017 at 2:57 PM
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poor old Camera ..and now they are almost entirely replaced by ssmart phones; so they tell me.
posted by
Kabu
on February 22, 2017 at 2:02 PM
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