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Re: WileyJohn

Thank you, Wiley, for reading and commenting. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 17, 2017 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Well done love, star flung poetry

posted by WileyJohn on January 16, 2017 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba

Stardust, we all are stardust.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 16, 2017 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba

I smile. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 16, 2017 at 1:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Great idea! That's what that little pic is. Love your creative mind! Thx! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 16, 2017 at 1:05 AM | link to this | reply

This should have the background of a magnificent Hubbel photo.

posted by TAPS. on January 15, 2017 at 11:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba

Oh that isn't your 'vernacular' but more appropriate, 'diamond dust'  indeed so !

 

posted by anib on January 15, 2017 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply

Aba

Thank you! Yes, yes, I know that. So we, on a good day, may each shine like the supernovas with whom we share particle matter, or in my vernacular, diamond dust! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 15, 2017 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

Exceedingly wel done my dear Presta

Your poem is good to the astronomical proportions. The close that they see us long after we are gone is absolutely true. And what is even more astounding is the fact that all of us are a body of stars. The material in our body comprises one-time blasted supernovas. Seen from another angle. We are actually stars. 

posted by anib on January 15, 2017 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you Sam. Glad you enjoyed. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 14, 2017 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

The close sums it up perfectly! Well done! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 14, 2017 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

brilliant..should go into a poetry contest. Love it and following Naut's post you nailed what he was saying. Actually it all made wonderful sense to me. between the two of you I have really enjoyed learning something. Naut gave is the facts and you my darling, brought is all to life.

posted by Kabu on January 14, 2017 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

I thought it I recognized a few scientific terms there...isn't great how we writers when we write inspire others to write something more!

posted by Annicita on January 14, 2017 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

It is a vast universe that of which we are a part of.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 14, 2017 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thank you,Naut! I'm glad it's okay. The apology was written for using your post as the basis for miy poem. I shall remove that part.  Thank you again. 

R

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 14, 2017 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, CC! It's good to hear that!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 14, 2017 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

Thank you, chuck! Glad you liked it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 14, 2017 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

RP

Well done - from the perspective of the 'binary dancers', LOL...But why the apology? ABSOLUTELY UNNECESSARY!!!

posted by Nautikos on January 14, 2017 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

You have a gentle imagination RP. I do like the poem, it is clever and constructive.

posted by C_C_T on January 14, 2017 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent use of words. Lovely poem 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on January 14, 2017 at 5:00 AM | link to this | reply