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Re: Re: Re: Aba
Wow, Great!
posted by
anib
on December 20, 2016 at 8:50 PM
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Re: Re: Aba
I can tell you are indeed an optimist by nature. I loved the story about the prayers. And I have waited for the Gypsies to finish playing their music before I gave them a couple of dollars, because it was so pretty to listen to. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 18, 2016 at 11:31 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
while I keep away from the news I am much happier dear Aba.
posted by
Kabu
on December 18, 2016 at 12:26 PM
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Re: pendorin
Tomorrow definitely will bring new Sunrays. Incidentally, my name in Sanskrit means The Sun. 
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:13 PM
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Re: TAPS
Your enjoying is saying a lot to me. Thank you ever so much.
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:10 PM
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Many thanks Annicita for your 
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:08 PM
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Re: Sis Shelley
I always love your keen observations. They are so apt analysis
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:07 PM
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Re: Kabu
How I wish that those bombarding go away, and that you recover your usual cheerfulness soon. But then you are a fine writer imho.
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:04 PM
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Re: FSI
Many thanks for reading and finding the capturing of the emotions well.
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:02 PM
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Re: Aba
Hi Presta dear, by nature I am an abiding optimist so these bouts do not affect me for long and as I have concluded in the last that it was gone in time with trust in the supreme power. Actually I read a story that a beggar caming to the door of a lady for food, singing psalms. The lady delayed giving him alms as she wanted to hear his beautiful rendition . Likewise, when God delays answering our prayers, don't get frustrated. He is liking the prayers and wants to hear some more. Thank you for your appreciating as always.
posted by
anib
on December 17, 2016 at 11:00 PM
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I had an email today--a long one--from my daughter-in-law who right now thinks that everything is coming down on her and is so unhappy over so many things, some of which whould not really bother me, but to her--terrible. Her complaint sounded like your sonnet only not in poetic form. I enjoyed reading yours.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 17, 2016 at 6:20 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on December 17, 2016 at 6:04 PM
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We are tested as the first line says to me! This is one fine poem! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2016 at 3:42 PM
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I know for me there is so much bombarding my brain and trying to remain cheerful at this time of the year is a real exhausting chore. Writing something meanigful as you have just done here, is beyond me so well done.
posted by
Kabu
on December 17, 2016 at 10:06 AM
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YOu capture the emotions well in your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 17, 2016 at 6:41 AM
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Beautifully written sounds a little Melancholy, but I will believe for Us that tomorrow will bring Us the Sun rays Aba!
posted by
pendorin
on December 17, 2016 at 5:28 AM
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Aba
Oh, I have never written a sonnet. Good for you, and the words were there! Sounds like you aren't in the best of moods, at least for writing right now, but yes, tomorrow will be better. Or the next day. Sometimes we need to have a break to refresh and renew. No words are coming to me right now that are worth composing into attempts at poetry. Nicely done and well-written, dear Aba!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 17, 2016 at 12:18 AM
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