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I'll have to come back to the Amherst posts.  I'm too far behind right now.

posted by TAPS. on January 12, 2015 at 3:23 AM | link to this | reply

PatB

Seems like you have a lot of work cut out for you here, want help? I'll edit if you want me to!!!!! No charge or anything just cuz you're family.

posted by WileyJohn on January 11, 2015 at 5:06 PM | link to this | reply

It is both actually and what is a story without a bit of heartache and emotion in it. No one lives a life without some joy and some pain. Lots of women I read now decided gainst marriage because they saw their mother and sisters trapped in having a baby every year,losing some, losing their own lives..Those women are always depicted as sad ugly spinsters grown sour for the lack of a man and sex. Many of them became Mother substitutes for their dead or over worked sister and were loved dearly by many children.some lost a beloved in a war and carried that pain...couldn't find anyone else to marry, the boys were all dead. BUT they had emotions and feelings. You are on the right track lovey.

posted by Kabu on January 11, 2015 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

sometimes our characters hand of a twist or two of their own!

posted by Annicita on January 11, 2015 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

I suppose our characters can discover things in the nooks and crannies of our psyches we didn't even know were there...

posted by Nautikos on January 11, 2015 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

Poor Pat I wish a Knight would lift you onto his horse and ride off to dreamland. Never mind you have bestowed love onto your children as did your Mum in her own way. Nothing better than a sweet love story. Don't tell anyone I said that.

posted by C_C_T on January 11, 2015 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Ah, the complexities and surprises of loving!

Sometimes we can't even be sure whether we do or don't, whether it is or isn't... or, what kind it may be...

posted by Ciel on January 11, 2015 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply