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Pat
An amazing story - the only disappointment was seeing "The End", as I wasn't ready to stop reading quite yet!! 
posted by
Mia890
on July 11, 2013 at 7:28 AM
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Outstanding! You are simply an amazing writer! I know where your son gets in now! sam 
posted by
sam444
on July 10, 2013 at 3:44 PM
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twisty little story that I really enjoyed.
posted by
Kabu
on July 9, 2013 at 8:27 PM
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Perfect writing Pat the end has to be believed well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 9, 2013 at 11:38 AM
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Pat
There's your 'patented' mysterious twist again, and in this case somehow comforting as well...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 9, 2013 at 9:01 AM
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Oh my - the unexpected! I love how you do characters in your stories. They live, even when, as in this post, they don't.
posted by
adnohr
on July 9, 2013 at 6:09 AM
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This is so sweet and charming!
You have some lovely ways with words!
posted by
Ciel
on July 9, 2013 at 6:06 AM
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