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Odd, isn't it, how life goes on its petty way while we're in the midst
of pain, personal chaos and confusion. This story was perfectly told, I wouldn't change a word. 
posted by
Pat_B
on June 3, 2013 at 5:13 AM
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Re: Re:Kabu
posted by
Kabu
on June 2, 2013 at 2:18 PM
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Re: She was oblivious, insensitive...
I guess we all could be nicer at time Ciel, perhaps I did not care at the time, I can't remember.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2013 at 7:57 AM
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She was oblivious, insensitive...
How could she have known...? But she still could have been nicer.
posted by
Ciel
on June 2, 2013 at 7:30 AM
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Re: CC.
Thank you Justi It just came to mind as I wrote it, I am sure most folk have had similar experiences.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2013 at 11:58 PM
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Re:Kabu
Thank you Kabu, at times as you know we have to struggle on despite how we feel.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2013 at 11:51 PM
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Re: Taps
Thank you Taps. We were really good pals, long time ago now it just came into my mind.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2013 at 11:48 PM
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Re: Naut
Cheers Naut, we all have times like this I am sure.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2013 at 11:45 PM
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Re: Jeansaw
Thank you I don't know what made me think of this.JS . I do hope you feel better.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2013 at 11:44 PM
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cc
sadness upon sadness, and yet you have remained kind, soft and pliable
posted by
jeansaw
on June 1, 2013 at 11:13 PM
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CCT
All I can really say is that this really touched me...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 1, 2013 at 9:17 PM
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You did good in every way. You did the work for your father. You treated the lady with respect even though she was disrespectful of you, and all the while you were grieving for your father. Kudos! We need more young fellows like that, and less women acting like her.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 1, 2013 at 7:52 PM
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how sad for that boy back then. You wrote this so well I feel his pain
posted by
Kabu
on June 1, 2013 at 3:34 PM
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CC.
This is an amazing post, full of imagery, feeling and incredibly good writing. 
posted by
Justi
on June 1, 2013 at 2:12 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on June 1, 2013 at 11:15 AM
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