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posted by
teddypoet52
on October 21, 2011 at 1:59 PM
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posted by
teddypoet52
on October 21, 2011 at 1:58 PM
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Truly, I must agree that the speaker does indeed know like no other might! Stunning imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 20, 2011 at 7:27 PM
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It is exciting Raye and a bit scary, it is the red meat of poetry.Well done
posted by
C_C_T
on October 19, 2011 at 11:25 AM
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You had me hanging onto every word.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 19, 2011 at 10:11 AM
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YJwJY Excellent poetry making love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 19, 2011 at 8:47 AM
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Re: exciting...i would like to see more of this...I wonder if this theme could
Thank you so much, Dear Kabu.
I actually wrote more, but couldn't decide which emotion to highlight, so I posted this portion..it is based on loving someone so deeply that time, distance and silence do not affect the strength of the passion embedded in breath, blood and the knowledge of forever spanning beyond flesh and the worlds we exist. There is ecstasy, joy and also a kind of hopeful anxiety in wondering if he still feels it too..
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 7:07 PM
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Re: Powerful!!!!
Thanks, Jeff.
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 6:53 PM
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exciting...i would like to see more of this...I wonder if this theme could
be expanded.
posted by
Kabu
on October 18, 2011 at 6:00 PM
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Powerful!!!!
posted by
jollyjeff
on October 18, 2011 at 4:13 PM
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