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Simple yet vividly loving :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on October 19, 2011 at 12:46 PM
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Re: It took me right there
Good to hear, Azur; Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on October 19, 2011 at 6:01 AM
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Thank you so much, Dear Sam!
posted by
Raye09
on October 19, 2011 at 6:00 AM
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Re: Oh this is precious......I can just see them up and down that fence
Thank you, Dear Kabu.
The little boy reaches through the fence to pat puppy's head (I'm right there with him to make sure gentleness is the order of the day, both ways, lol) and puppy nuzzles and licks his hand..:)
posted by
Raye09
on October 19, 2011 at 6:00 AM
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It took me right there
posted by
Azur
on October 18, 2011 at 11:29 PM
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Truly robust and I visualized it all as I read and thought of my owns sons when they were small! They did not have the same scenario but in a similar way with the wild things of nature! This was truly magnificent! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 18, 2011 at 7:55 PM
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Oh this is precious......I can just see them up and down that fence
playingt enjoying the joy of being young...perhaps some time soon they will touch.
posted by
Kabu
on October 18, 2011 at 5:24 PM
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Thanks, CCT!
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 12:30 PM
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Re: Well done again!
Thank you very much, Ted..
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 12:29 PM
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Thanks, UJ.
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 12:29 PM
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Good to hear, FSI. Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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Re: A truly remarkable poem, happy and full of life. It gets more
Thank you, Bob!
posted by
Raye09
on October 18, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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Sweet little poem Ray we need that innocence.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 18, 2011 at 11:52 AM
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Well done again!
posted by
teddypoet52
on October 18, 2011 at 11:10 AM
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I once had the same relationship with my neighbors duck.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 18, 2011 at 10:46 AM
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This poem makes me feel good inside.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 18, 2011 at 9:45 AM
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A truly remarkable poem, happy and full of life. It gets more
delightful with each reading. Quite an accomplishment! - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 18, 2011 at 9:41 AM
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