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Sad Story but great writing
reads like fiction

posted by jollyjeff on June 21, 2011 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

It has the making of high drama and all the other elements to set the stage for pure betrayal! I hope something come of it! sam 

posted by sam444 on June 17, 2011 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sad ending seemed almost inevitable
but a really interesting journey. Thanks for sharing here

posted by malcolm on June 17, 2011 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply

Boy, what an experience. I would give less and let her keep on complaining

posted by Straightforward on June 16, 2011 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

I just had to read through to the end ...non stop this is good.
a couple of typo errors...do a spell check and it is perfect. Just the sort of nightmare that is so crazy...it has to be true.congratulations and good luck.

posted by Kabu on June 16, 2011 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

You had me hanging onto every word wondering what was going to happen next. It's ashame that things ended up going the way that they did.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 16, 2011 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

This would be a great book/movie/tv show with all its suspense, action, and romance.

posted by reasons on June 16, 2011 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

That was a bad start; I hope it got better.  I wonder if she deserved that much from you when her house was in a terrible condition before it was fixed, but I do not really know anything about being a real estate agent or what is required of one.  People can turn out different than expected, to say the least.

posted by mariss9 on June 16, 2011 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Had me hooked as well.  What a story!  Sorry you got hurt in the process though.

posted by Troosha on June 16, 2011 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

I liked it. I agree with Sinome's comments. Go for it lady, you deserve it. Don't give away your profits on this book. I am already to talk to this man about how to treat my friend better. I will keep up with this. Be blessed.

posted by Justi on June 16, 2011 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

All I can tell you is that it kept me riveted till the end ... Its well written and it flows nicely.  The detail about the heal ( you might want to look at the spelling of that... I am not sure but hill does not seem right) staying on the steps was cute and significant, taking me inmediately to Cinderela's image.  I loved it.  Good luck with it!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on June 16, 2011 at 6:11 AM | link to this | reply

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