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Sad Story but great writing
reads like fiction
posted by
jollyjeff
on June 21, 2011 at 12:51 PM
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It has the making of high drama and all the other elements to set the stage for pure betrayal! I hope something come of it! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 17, 2011 at 5:36 PM
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Sad ending seemed almost inevitable
but a really interesting journey. Thanks for sharing here
posted by
malcolm
on June 17, 2011 at 12:05 PM
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Boy, what an experience. I would give less and let her keep on complaining
posted by
Straightforward
on June 16, 2011 at 7:04 PM
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I just had to read through to the end ...non stop this is good.
a couple of typo errors...do a spell check and it is perfect. Just the sort of nightmare that is so crazy...it has to be true.congratulations and good luck.
posted by
Kabu
on June 16, 2011 at 7:03 PM
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You had me hanging onto every word wondering what was going to happen next. It's ashame that things ended up going the way that they did.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 16, 2011 at 5:26 PM
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This would be a great book/movie/tv show with all its suspense, action, and romance.
posted by
reasons
on June 16, 2011 at 11:31 AM
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That was a bad start; I hope it got better. I wonder if she deserved that much from you when her house was in a terrible condition before it was fixed, but I do not really know anything about being a real estate agent or what is required of one. People can turn out different than expected, to say the least.
posted by
mariss9
on June 16, 2011 at 11:25 AM
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Had me hooked as well. What a story! Sorry you got hurt in the process though.
posted by
Troosha
on June 16, 2011 at 10:48 AM
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I liked it. I agree with Sinome's comments. Go for it lady, you deserve it. Don't give away your profits on this book. I am already to talk to this man about how to treat my friend better. I will keep up with this. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on June 16, 2011 at 6:47 AM
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All I can tell you is that it kept me riveted till the end ... Its well written and it flows nicely. The detail about the heal ( you might want to look at the spelling of that... I am not sure but hill does not seem right) staying on the steps was cute and significant, taking me inmediately to Cinderela's image. I loved it. Good luck with it! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 16, 2011 at 6:11 AM
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