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So much to think about here eburns, thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 27, 2010 at 1:43 AM
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Excellent work!
posted by
Sinome
on October 26, 2010 at 6:37 PM
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This is rising the bar! You really took creativity to another level! Great
posted by
Mystereo
on October 26, 2010 at 5:05 PM
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Such a dynamic conclusion! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 26, 2010 at 2:56 PM
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a stone skipping
I felt as if I was there as I read every line. Good poem.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 26, 2010 at 1:42 PM
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This is to my perceptions, true poetry and you a true poet
as you express through your particular eyes, looking out and looking in, universal truths.
I say this after reading down the page, not only this one poem.
posted by
Ciel
on October 26, 2010 at 10:57 AM
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How lovely!
I read it twice - very impressive.
posted by
Kate07
on October 26, 2010 at 10:52 AM
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ah and the dapping of this stone,
lifted by another --- this is beautiful. I so enjoyed each line. each metaphor and analogy! Perfect!
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 26, 2010 at 10:17 AM
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Good images with a hidden perception
posted by
C_C_T
on October 26, 2010 at 8:47 AM
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what superb imagery! I like this poem a great deal
posted by
lionreign
on October 26, 2010 at 7:42 AM
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My Dad taught me to skip stones when I was a little girl. I never then dreamed that I would ever be a Stone teaching little Stones to skip stones or that those little Stones would grow up to be big Stones teaching other little Stones to be skipping stones.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 26, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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