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My heart is crying once more with the ache that seeps from this poem. And yet I love how the end has that small bit of hope because even sadness can be sweet. It's beautiful, Marta.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:07 PM
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Very, very special.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 6, 2009 at 10:47 AM
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This is so very lovely Sinome
After the sadness comes light as so many have said eloquently
posted by
Azur
on June 6, 2009 at 2:50 AM
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a sad poems but all endings are. The good thing though in this balanced world with every ending there is a new begining just waiting to jump out at you.......now that is not sad, that is exciting
posted by
spiderfly
on June 6, 2009 at 12:01 AM
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Your exquisite poem has touched my soul deeply and tears are flowing within my heart. Thank you for sharing!
posted by
BrightIrish
on June 5, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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Sinome
You described so very well a terrible sadness that I lived for over 8 years after my Joycie died. Then God felt my sadness of which you wrote and sent me another lady of equal quality of heart and soul, my Kabuiepie.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 5, 2009 at 6:13 PM
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Sinome
A poem of such sweet sorrow...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 5, 2009 at 2:29 PM
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heat broken beauty
your lyrical tears amaze my now weeping heart. That which we have loved, we always love at least a little. that which we no longer love, we never did
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:06 AM
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Sinome your poem is heart wrenching, pouring into a cup that never fills. Even in sadness...there is beauty to be found.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 5, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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Wow, very deep into the emotions you feel when a person leaves. Well expressed, I hope this is not how you're feeling right now :(
posted by
calia14
on June 4, 2009 at 11:54 PM
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Excellent...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 4, 2009 at 11:47 PM
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Sinome
Sadness so wonderfully expressed.
posted by
shobana
on June 4, 2009 at 11:42 PM
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I so agree that sadness can be sweet! It doesn't always make sense but once experienced, it has a whole new flavor! Wonderful imagery! I don't know how to put pictures on my blog or auntie would have plastered him all over! It was so cute today because he was over to my place today with his dad getting my washer, dryer and refrigerator hooked up and all the while the rest were at his house decorating for the party after ceremonies! He didn't have a clue! He was so stoked! sammy loves you!!!! sammy
xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on June 4, 2009 at 11:09 PM
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It is so hard to live as a forgotten being and
like the tree holding on the the very last leaf to be remembered.
posted by
skye08
on June 4, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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Absolute pleasure to read this high quality work. Kudos!
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 4, 2009 at 6:48 PM
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Such pain.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 4, 2009 at 4:19 PM
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My heart aches too. So pensive and longing with sad!
posted by
merkie
on June 4, 2009 at 11:06 AM
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~ sigh ~... now those are sad thoughts indeed, Sinome, My heart breaks for you (or with you).
posted by
Troosha
on June 4, 2009 at 10:57 AM
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