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The Scorekeeper allows us ample time to us before recording the goals unlike the arbiter who whistles every goal
posted by
adventurer02
on January 25, 2016 at 1:33 AM
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You went deep into the wll drawing my awareness is there a score keeper.
Deep creativity great read.
posted by
Mystereo
on March 3, 2009 at 11:30 AM
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This made me laugh, perhaps inappropriately, and at the same moment glance over my shoulder. Well done!
posted by
shanna63437
on February 3, 2009 at 8:07 PM
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Welcome to Blogit!
Seems to me, we are each deputized, and keep our own scores. We know better than anyone, what's on that sheet of deeds, both fair and foul!
posted by
Ciel
on February 3, 2009 at 3:54 PM
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Wonderful reading! I feared that score-keeper but i got like his fairness!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 2, 2009 at 8:28 PM
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A most stunning display of rhyme and reason...Great post!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 2, 2009 at 7:22 PM
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It appears we are on the same train of thought this fine evening! I thought this was a great mini epic! I like the refrain and the cadence while getting a peek into the narrator's youth! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 2, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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Beautifully choreographed lines.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on February 2, 2009 at 4:07 PM
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