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Hey, Naut, I thought about putting spaces to make it more Haiku-

friendly, but decided that most people would get it either way and went for the streaming expletive version...

posted by saul_relative on April 1, 2008 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, FYS. It was nothing. Really...

posted by saul_relative on April 1, 2008 at 7:05 AM | link to this | reply

I think this piece shows real promise.

posted by FineYoungSinger on March 31, 2008 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

That's excellent, Saul!

You just haven't got the syllable pattern quite right yet - remember, it's 5-7-5...

posted by Nautikos on March 30, 2008 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, katray...

posted by saul_relative on March 29, 2008 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

Lol Saul, Good One!

You've outdone yourself, I do believe..:)..

posted by PoetRaye on March 28, 2008 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

That's nothing, Whacky, You should hear me during a game where the

Dallas Cowboys are losing badly...

posted by saul_relative on March 28, 2008 at 6:10 AM | link to this | reply

Sam: that would be in the Beetle Bailey lexicon, I do believe...

posted by saul_relative on March 28, 2008 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, I definitely get that, Azur...

posted by saul_relative on March 28, 2008 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

It's like telemarketer rage, TAPS...

posted by saul_relative on March 28, 2008 at 6:05 AM | link to this | reply

LOL! That's really something!

=^. .^= Bo is smiling about something. I am too! A rose from me!

posted by Whacky on March 27, 2008 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

I would love to read the translation. just kidding.  sam

posted by sam444 on March 27, 2008 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Saul

You are married aren't you? That kind of anger ;-)

 

posted by Azur on March 27, 2008 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply

Saul_relative, I can't quite make out the details, but I definitely get the feel. 

posted by TAPS. on March 26, 2008 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply

Are you alright? Is everything okay? What are you so angry about?

posted by saul_relative on March 26, 2008 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Saul, the way I am now

I need a shelf full of books to fill. I am angry beyond anything I have felt  probably ever

 

posted by Azur on March 26, 2008 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Write two, Azur. Or a sonnet. Or a bawdy, expletive filled limerick.

posted by saul_relative on March 26, 2008 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

that's funny Saul Relative

I would need more than a haiku to express my exasperation right now.

 

posted by Azur on March 26, 2008 at 11:07 PM | link to this | reply