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You say so much in so few words. 

posted by TAPS. on February 23, 2008 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444, you mustn't feel guilt. Most people
know what a gift of time and care it is to comment as you do, and as inspiring as you are, you are still human I think. So when you are tired, replenish yourself please, and then you return refreshed.

posted by Azur on February 23, 2008 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: In this story...
CunningLinguist, that twist in the tale is quite something. And being warmer than your average iceberg, well that's going to be interesting. Smile.

posted by Azur on February 23, 2008 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I sense unhappiness in your writing. You are a great writer. Remember t
Kabu, thank you. At the time that letter was written, things were very far from good.

 I suppose like any writer, I am on a quest to improve and to express what I need to say.

I think writers never rest easy, when sometimes we should.

posted by Azur on February 23, 2008 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

In this story...
The reader comes to the realization that you are not the Titanic, but rather the iceberg.  A little role reversal, where you're the steadfast, unyielding will and your possible adversary turns out to be a toy boat.  Your audience watches and continues to cheer you on.

posted by CunningLinguist on February 23, 2008 at 1:10 PM | link to this | reply

hey dear friend, you are a winner

posted by star4sky5 on February 22, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

I sense unhappiness in your writing. You are a great writer. Remember that
and hang onto the fact that many people agree with me.

posted by Kabu on February 22, 2008 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Azur, your incredible comment was so timely. I was feeling guilty because I was so tired and there was so much I wanted to read. It has been a great pleasure for me to see the growth in work. I have the good fortune to be ill and unable to hold a job but the Lord knows I love to work so He put me here and I have been enriched as deeply as your comment gives stature to my mission. I am so please you liked my commenting as well. Now, down to business, I need a new book. Please tell me what I need to do to get up to speed with your book. sam

posted by sam444 on February 22, 2008 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply