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Beautiful
I can now see what your saying about the pic of that girl being cute... maybe thats why i was attracted to her??????? hehe
posted by
Shanlizer88
on February 19, 2008 at 11:55 PM
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Seedlings
Now there's a sentence - a quotable - that captures so much emotion!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on February 15, 2008 at 8:21 AM
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Pretty
it's visual... ah..... can almost see it right in front of you.
posted by
majesticvisions
on February 15, 2008 at 8:10 AM
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We have a winner!
Very very nice. Soul-siphoned poetry - the only way to go. Great job, my friend.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on February 15, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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Thank you all
for your lovely comments.
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on February 15, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Seedlings
You have condensed so much into so few words - it's breathtaking...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 15, 2008 at 7:06 AM
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Seedlings
This is so beautiful I copied it to add to my cubicle wall of words (I call it my sanity wall). I love the poetry and the rhythm of it. It also spoke so personally to me because my pillows are ver important to me and go everywhere with me....I never travel without my own. The only thing in my pillow not mentioned are the giggles I've had to smother and the words I've had to eat......
posted by
Krisles
on February 15, 2008 at 6:27 AM
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oH btw...this is one of the prettiest poems I think I've ever seen
posted by
mysteria
on February 15, 2008 at 1:15 AM
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hello seedlings...
I aspire to see the world through eyes like yours...
posted by
mysteria
on February 15, 2008 at 1:14 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on February 14, 2008 at 10:58 PM
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oh my dear
, things for me will be ok and you too. Woman are strong, I know I am....
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on February 14, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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I like that!!!!
Quick, smooth, and elegantly spoken.
posted by
Loribeth215
on February 14, 2008 at 8:23 PM
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That Was Nice!
Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head
posted by
CRShelley
on February 14, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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just so heart breaking there are tears in my eyes.Thankyou darling.
posted by
Kabu
on February 14, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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Beautiful poem, Bravo! :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 14, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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I like the essence of this statement! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 14, 2008 at 7:30 PM
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Happy Valentine's Day.........
posted by
star4sky5
on February 14, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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