Hidden eeries of desire echo to angelsongs of love: Delightful World

Monday, March 17, 2008

Delightful World

OK so this one is bothering me, it just doesn't feel right and I've now poked prodded and tweaked it enough that I can no longer see the poem for the words, so I am breaking with habit and posting a work I don't like. Please feel free to tell me where you think the problem is - your input is always... Sign in to see full entry.

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