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Saturday, October 25, 2008

Sorry but I must leave Blogit

I haven't been on Blogit for a few months, and have not been writing, so I figure I might as well save the expense and close my account. Thank you to all for your comments, support, praise, constructive criticism, and feel free to e-mail me if you want to stay in touch. Goodbye Sign in to see full entry.

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Saturday, July 19, 2008

My heart

For those who would like a visual representation of this feeling, the 9 of swords is close enough. My heart 19/7/08 My heart Is on its knees It curls into the fetal position And shivers Curls into itself As if stabbed Pain is all it knows Right now There is nothing else But love Which is pain Sign in to see full entry.

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Saturday, May 17, 2008

Please believe me

I hate breaking bad news to someone who doesn't deserve sadness. Please believe me 17/5/08 I want you I do I want you with a desire That engulfs And smolders me To a cinder I want you buried in me I want it perhaps as much as You do Thrusting deep and uncontrollable Passion spilling and overflowing... Sign in to see full entry.

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Saturday, March 22, 2008

Real

Real 22/3/06 I know you are asleep I know you dream of me Can you make it real More importantly Can you make it good Can you make it right Can you make it last Forever Sign in to see full entry.

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Saturday, January 26, 2008

Shadows

I'm back in New Zealand, back in the land where everyone seems so happy. So of course, the contrarian in me would love to ask these people, "Don't you ever fucking get depressed?!?" I am now in yet another transitional phase in my life, "in between", a place that nobody likes to admit they're in... Sign in to see full entry.

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Thursday, January 17, 2008

The Forbiddens

The Forbiddens 18/1/08 A pick axe a shovel a machete I cut down the forbidden fruit You no longer exist It falls to my feet Dead as a moa smudged and broken no more appeal it is sullied lashed with dirt My life is so much cleaner (in the simple, not the moral, sense) now that you Forbiddens are no... Sign in to see full entry.

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Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Apologies for absence and here's a small poem

I have only been writing prose, not for public consumption, so I have not been writing on Blogit for some time. But here is a tiny poem I wrote recently. Tragic heroes 9/1/08 I love tragic heroes they're the only ones I've got. No one is strong all the time. They're all weak. Sign in to see full entry.

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Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Something old....

I wrote this a couple of years ago about the fascination (that's the best word for it) I had for a friend of mine whom I was once madly in love with. Thankfully we're still friends, he tolerated my obsession for as long as it lasted and somehow our friendship survived. I use the word fascination... Sign in to see full entry.

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Monday, November 26, 2007

Obsession

Inspired by the title of this blog. Obsession 11/25/07 The irony is just so beautiful That the relationships I most Obsess over and Desire Above all others Are nothing compared to the healthy ones But which ones do I devote my energy to…? The ones that will never truly Exist Sign in to see full entry.

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Sunday, November 25, 2007

Wish

Wish 11/19/07 Do you know what I wished for that night? I don't waste wishes on small things I don't wish for sunshine tomorrow or chocolate cake for my birthday. I wished for our lives to collide. Try putting that in a gift box. Sign in to see full entry.

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Poetry intended to relieve the dissonance in my head and my heart, but meant to be read by others, as poetry just for myself isn't cutting it for me anymore. I'm taking the plunge, and looking for feedback. And wondering if there's anybody out there.

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