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Life is pain that why we live for the moments when we are whole. Great sad!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 18, 2008 at 6:02 PM
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how good to see you back!
i'm so sorry though about those sad feelings. They are so beautifully expressed though! 
posted by
pelagus
on July 28, 2008 at 3:04 AM
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This is outstanding! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 9:44 AM
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Very nice
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 19, 2008 at 4:47 AM
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Very original imagery in your metaphor. Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 19, 2008 at 4:41 AM
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