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For those of us who followed the story it can be like one of the books where you pick your own ending! I have Slim as stand up guy and the gal got taken against her will. She named Slim to protect her dignity and then Slim goes on a hunt to make the perp pay for his dirty deed which has many twists and turns before returning to the gal to rekindle their relationship. He let her know anyone can plant a seed, so to speak,  but it's the care and nurturing that matters. The end. Lol 

posted by sam444 on October 31, 2026 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

Good Afternoon

Good afternoon.  That story was great.  You are an outstanding writer.  It is absolutely a joy to read the pieces you write.

posted by Amanda__ on October 31, 2026 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning. The story was a good one. It is too bad that you lost the rough draft. It was headed someplace interesting. With your creative mind, I'm sure you will come up with many more stories for us to enjoy. Happy Halloween!

posted by Sherri_G on October 31, 2026 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply