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Grr, the story had great potential. I wish you would give it some more thought. You had me contemplating the course of action. I can only hope you get back to it one day. 

posted by sam444 on October 26, 2026 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed your story, as I love everything you write.

posted by Amanda__ on October 26, 2026 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Good Afternoon

Pat, I really liked your story.  Now we will never know what happened.  I hope you have a good day.

posted by Goldiec on October 26, 2026 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning. I watched Gunsmoke as a child, which likely sparked my love for Western shows and movies. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story; while it echoes some elements of Gunsmoke, your unique portrayal of the Old West is captivating and keeps readers fully engaged, eager for more.

posted by Sherri_G on October 26, 2026 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Pat.....

So, whatcha gonna do now  Mrs. Patricia?   Are ya gonna write a different version or a brand new story of something else?

posted by TAPS. on October 26, 2026 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply